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  #11  
Old 10-14-2004, 03:22 PM
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hehe...Hoi oi. Ru con nguoi ta dzia vn ma khong bao ve' la sao Kay :lol: Con nguoi ta ha`ng la.u hay sao so ho?i dza'y to*` dzay he'n ;)

2 Annie :D Manh gioi hi? Tho hay la'm...co gi viet them he'n. Ut ranh la'm...cho nen thich ddoc :)


The day I found you
Was like I found heaven
There's nuttin I won't do
I'm safe in ur presence

My heart is urs 2 keep
It beats 4 ur name
Evenwhen I'm asleep
It calls 4 u...all the same

My world lives because u live
U bring the sunny days
How will I survive...
If u ever went away...???

I don't need 4ever
2 luv u with all my heart
I'll cherish the time we have 2gether
If one day...we are apart...
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Khi ye^u chang bie't ra`ng yeu
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Old 10-15-2004, 09:36 PM
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Don't remember how it happened,
Can't remember when.
Somehow you went from being my email buddy,
And became my best friend,
I know that we belong to others;
I'm not the type to cheat.
So why when I read your words,
Does my heart skip a beat?
So here I am, unsure of what to do;
The only feeling I am sure of, is my love for you.
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but what I know is in my heart.
I know our love was never real,
for our love has fallen apart.
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Old 10-17-2004, 03:03 AM
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Thought I was in love
And it was 4ever
But...there's some1 I think of
And it's not my lover

Did I have a change of heart???
Has my love suddenly run dry???
I still miss u....when we're apart
But I don't wanna lie...

I don't know where
Or when my love's ceased
But I still care...
And I hope u know this...

It still hurt me 2 see u cry
2 see the tears u shed
But...I must say good-bye
4 our love is dead...


2 kay :) Khoe hi? Ui dzui ui...sao ma mo'i an ddo' roi tha'y ddoi bung nua dzay ta...hehe :lol: Thoi ut ddi xisleep..nite hi?
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Old 10-27-2004, 09:32 PM
KayCeeSJ KayCeeSJ is offline
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:) Ut, nho truoc khi sleep thi eat đo nha. Khong thoi hungry thi lam sao ma sleep đuoc. ;) how have you been doing sweetie? sowwie nha, tai may ngay qua cai old illness tro lai. thiet tinh cai benh "ghien bai" khong co thuoc tri ;) .

when i'm alone in my room, sometimes i stare at the wall
and in the back of my mind, i hear my conscience call.
telling me i need a girl, who's as sweet as a dove
for the first time in my life, i see i need love.
there i was, giggling about the games
that i had played with many hearts and i'm not saying any names.
then the thought occurred, teardrops made my eyes burned
'cause i said to myself, "look what you've done to her".
i could feel it inside, i can't explain how we feel
all i know is that, i'll never miss another raw deal.
playing make-belief, pretending that i'm true
holding in my laugh, as i say that i love you.

saying no more, kissing you on the ear
whispering "i love you", and i'll always be here.
although i often reminisce, i can't believe that i've found
a desire for true love, floating around.
inside my soul, because my soul is cold
one-half of me deserves to be this way 'till i'm old.
but the other half, needs affection and joy
and the warmth, that's created by a girl and a boy.
romance sheds the light, how sweet
i gotta find a girl to make my life complete.
you can scratch my back, we'll get cozy and huddle
i'll lay down my jacket so you can walk over a puddle.
i'll give you a rose, pull out your chair before we eat
kiss you on the cheek and say "ooh girl, you so sweet".
it's dejavu, whenever i'm with you
i can go on forever telling you what i'd do.
but where you at? you're neither here nor there
i swear, i can't find you anywhere.
damn sure ain't in my closet, or under my rug
this love search is really making me bugged.
if you know who you are, won't you make yourself seen
take a chance with my love and you'll see what i mean.
fantasies can run, but they can't hide
and when i find you, i'll pour all my love inside.
i wanna kiss you, hold you, never scold you, just love you
suck on your neck, caress you and rub you.
grind, moan, and never be alone
if you're not standing next to me, you're on the phone.
can't you hear it in my voice, i need love bad
i got money, but love's something i never had.
i need your ruby red lips, sweet face and all
i'll love you more than a man who's ten-feet tall.
i'll watch the sun rise in your eyes
we'll fall in love, when we hug we become paralyzed.
our bodies explode in ecstasy unreal
you're as soft as a pillow, i'm as hard as steel.
it's like a dreamland, i can't lie, i've never been there
maybe this is an experience that me and you can share.
humid, unsoiled, yet sweaty and wet
i swear to you, this is something i'll never forget.
see what i mean, i've changed, i'm no longer
a playboy on the run, i need something that's stronger.
friendship, trust, i don't expect admiration
this whole experience has been such a revelation.
it's taught me love and how to be a real man
to be considerate and do all that i can.
protect you, you're my lady, and you mean so much
my body tingles all over from the slightest touch.
of your hand, and understand, i'll be frozen in time
'till we meet face to face and you tell me your mine.
if i find you, i swear i'll be a good man
i'm not gonna leave it in destiny's hands.
i can't sit and wait for my princess to arrive
i gotta struggle and fight to keep my dream alive.
i'll search the whole world for that special girl
when i finally find you, i'll watch our love for sure.

-LLCJ-
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but what I know is in my heart.
I know our love was never real,
for our love has fallen apart.
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Old 11-01-2004, 03:27 PM
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2 Kay :) Lau ngay khong gap...tuong ddau kay bi anh nao ba't roi cho*' hi`hi` :lol: Ui dzui ui...ddoc dda ddoi...tuong ddau Kay lam. Ai nhe...cua LLCJ ;) Lam ti'nh ddua Kay len lam tha`n tuong cua Ut nua cho*'...hehe B) Ben Kay co gi dzui khong hi...co ddi trick-or-treat khong ddo'? Nieu co' thi ddung co' wen chi em he'n :D



I've been searching high and low
I've been searching far and wide
Would u please let me know
If u'll be by my side...

My better half is somewhere
A place I wanna be
If u hear my prayer...
Will u come find me???...

My soul is not complete
Emptiness dwells in my heart
Until the day we meet...
My life has yet 2 start

Ur the reason I'm here
The will that keeps me awake
Till the day that u are near
I'll be a living wreak...

Days and nites I'll wait
4 u my only love
Ur my perfect mate...
Was made from above
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Nho*' thuong nhung ke dda~ xa mi`nh ro^`i
Khi ye^u chang bie't ra`ng yeu
Khi xa mo'i bie^'t nho*' thuong ra't nhie`u (anonymous)
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Old 11-05-2004, 10:00 AM
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:lol: too old roi xin keo ai cho nua :lol: :blink: kc ma hay đuoc vay...la kc la than tuong cua rieng kc luon goy :lol: biet 2-3chu lap ra cho Ut vui thoi chu hay ho cai gi na :P Ut dzao nay khoe hong na?? ben đay thi troi mua, íts so cold...tim nguoi trum men chung cho am né ;) ....take care nha Ut..

wise men once said "everyone has a perfect match"
if that's true...sweetheart, i'm thinking of you
thinking of some1 with a good sense of humor,
who can trust my love and won't believe rumors
because people like to talk when you have a good thing
especially if they're single and they don't wear a ring
'cause you'll have me and they'll have none
we'll have a table for two, they'll have a table for one
we'll have alot of laughs, while some sing the blues
where are you now, i'm thinking of you...
thinking of some1 who's devoted and will stand behind me...
100 percent and won't nag or remind me...
when my ideas or hopeless, or i'm on the wrong track
instead, he'll hold me in his arms or massage my back
treats me like a queen, make me feel kind of royal
and when i'm on the road i know that he'll be loyal
'cause we first became friends before our love grew
sweetheart, tell me you think of me too?
i'm thinking of a guy that's smart, who pursues his own goals
and makes love to me at night, when it gets kinda cold
and then, when we wake-up...
boy you're so fine, a face that looks good, no need for touch-up
reminding me, beauty is deep within the skin and near a bone marrow
and that i'm choosing the path to my love kinda narrow
but you're gonna make it because your love is true
until then i'm waiting and thinking of you


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but what I know is in my heart.
I know our love was never real,
for our love has fallen apart.
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Old 11-06-2004, 03:03 AM
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Days I've been waiting
4 my only soul mate
Why are u hiding...???
When it's getting late

I want u 2 hold me
Till the day we grow old
Where could u be...
When it's getting cold

hehe...ui dzui ui...buon ngu wa' :D Chat 2 be continue hi? Kay ;) Nite! :)
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Old 11-06-2004, 06:36 PM
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I come to visit you
even on this cruel wintry day,
and gaze across the meadow
where, as children we would play.

And I speak to you sweetly
over the chorus of the birds.
I understand, and it's okay that
you no longer speak to me through words.

I'll be with you again,
that I know is true...
but for now it's very hard
to live my life without you.

I still feel your presence,
I think of you and feel less alone,
and with flowers in my hand,
I lay my love upon your stone
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Toi tra cho anh niem thuong noi nho
Toi tra cho anh mong dep ngay xua
Toi tra cho anh tam hon ngay` cu
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Old 11-07-2004, 03:00 AM
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2 SanJoseGirl :D Wow...tho hay wa' ta ;)


I kept u in my heart
And 4ever u will stay
When you're no longer a part...
Of my lonely days...

I will see u again
See your smiling face
Love will always remain...
And u will have a place

Tears can't bring u back
So I promise I won't cry
Until the day we meet...
I'll keep u by my side

U will always be here
Living in my memories
Until the world disappear...
You'll always be with me
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Nho*' thuong nhung ke dda~ xa mi`nh ro^`i
Khi ye^u chang bie't ra`ng yeu
Khi xa mo'i bie^'t nho*' thuong ra't nhie`u (anonymous)
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Old 11-09-2004, 12:17 AM
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Thanks Co_ut :D đọc thơ CO-UT tháy thất tình wé ....Sanj tặng bài này cho cô_út nè đọc nè :D

To CO_UT
I want you to be happy
I want you to enjoy life
I don't want you to feel empty
Or be consumed in strife

I wish there were some way
To erase the pain you've been through
And I wish the words I daily say
Could bring some sense of comfort to you

I would love to know how you feel
God knows I'd love to know
I wish I had the power to heal
As if I was some super hero

I wish I could break your falls
Be the one to fall onto the ground
I wish I could walk with you through those halls
And never let anyone put you down

I wish I could do more for you
Like save you from future heart breaks
I wish I could invent some type of medicine
To heal all your hearts wounds and aches

My dear friend...
If I could have any wish come true
It'd be for your happiness to never end
And to always remember how much I love you
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Toi tra cho anh mong dep ngay xua
Toi tra cho anh tam hon ngay` cu
Trai? lai nhung gi` con xot lai trong tim
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